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~~Agnes signature~~
Cold.- Chiller
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- Post n°1
~~Agnes signature~~
Scotland- Chiller
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- Post n°2
Re: ~~Agnes signature~~
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1) Too much red, right hand side, filled = bad.
2) Bad border, red doesn't work for the border.
3) Bad smudging.
4) Bad text, outlined too many times.
5) The white C4D and the purple highlights in the red bit arn't nice.
6) Whatever you've done to her face is strange... you've like... made it shiny... yuck.
All thsose points knock it down to a 4/10. I think that's fair seeing as a gave you 6 bad points.
1) Too much red, right hand side, filled = bad.
2) Bad border, red doesn't work for the border.
3) Bad smudging.
4) Bad text, outlined too many times.
5) The white C4D and the purple highlights in the red bit arn't nice.
6) Whatever you've done to her face is strange... you've like... made it shiny... yuck.
All thsose points knock it down to a 4/10. I think that's fair seeing as a gave you 6 bad points.
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- Post n°3
Re: ~~Agnes signature~~
Wow, this is actually quite good.
One off your best.
8.5/10 Well done,man!
One off your best.
8.5/10 Well done,man!
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- Post n°4
Re: ~~Agnes signature~~
I disagree with almost everything Scotland said. I agree that there's too much red and the text isn't great. Border could be better. This is great though, I see your working on your flow and smudging. Next time, try adding lighting and blurring part of the background that isn't needed. Also, try moving the render/stock a bit to the left. The focal is really bad.
Scotland- Chiller
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- Post n°5
Re: ~~Agnes signature~~
It's the blurring of the hair that i dislike, the fact that it's too red with little texture.
Ofcourse it's better than your other sigs, it's just not very good... your first ones were your best, why are these bleeh?
I agree with what Robo said ot be honest.
Ofcourse it's better than your other sigs, it's just not very good... your first ones were your best, why are these bleeh?
I agree with what Robo said ot be honest.
Cold.- Chiller
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- Post n°6
Re: ~~Agnes signature~~
I agree with you on the border, I rushed it.
I actually nearly cried, because I have had 2 good comments.
Omg thanks robo, and I was folowing some smudging tuts, I used a "T" brush, used lighten etc.
Why the sudden contradict scot?
I didn't blur the hair, I think it must be the blending mode of the C4D, and the background doesn't have a texture because it was smudged, but the C4D unfocussed it.
I actually nearly cried, because I have had 2 good comments.
Omg thanks robo, and I was folowing some smudging tuts, I used a "T" brush, used lighten etc.
Why the sudden contradict scot?
I didn't blur the hair, I think it must be the blending mode of the C4D, and the background doesn't have a texture because it was smudged, but the C4D unfocussed it.
Scotland- Chiller
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- Post n°7
Re: ~~Agnes signature~~
I'm not contradicting...
I just think what most of Robo said is true, i'm keeping to what i first said, in all honesty it's crap, but people don't want to hear that so i didn't say it.
I just think what most of Robo said is true, i'm keeping to what i first said, in all honesty it's crap, but people don't want to hear that so i didn't say it.
Cold.- Chiller
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- Post n°8
Re: ~~Agnes signature~~
Okay, I didn't want to make a new topic, so posted it here.
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Scotland- Chiller
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- Post n°9
Re: ~~Agnes signature~~
I don't like the render... scary, and what's with the orange border? That doesn't work.You could have one some smudging...
Cold.- Chiller
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- Post n°10
Re: ~~Agnes signature~~
One some smudging? I guess it's a typo, what did you mean?
Scotland- Chiller
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- Post n°11
Re: ~~Agnes signature~~
Done i think i meant.
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