My story

I made a story a few years ago to win a domain. It was only a small piece but a lot of enthusiasm was used to make it..

The winter passed by slowly in the forest, and a gleaming mist covered a large expanse of ground. The young man went on by the forest until he finds incidentally what seemed to be an amulet of a kind. The amulet was perched among what was a small concrete bar.

Never nobody had seen an amulet as twas. It shone by the mist.

Among the concrete bar a small note was which read...

" This amulet contains a strong power,
Gods were immersed by it;
That they were banished to an unfortunate death "

EDITED

The winter passed by, slowly, slowly in that very special forest, and a gleaming mist covered a large expanse of ground. A young man, around the age of 25, went on by the forest until he found what seemed to be an amulet of a kind. The amulet was perched among what was a small concrete bar.

Never nobody had seen an amulet as twas. It shone by the mist.

Among the concrete bar a small note was which read...

"This amulet contains a strong power,
It puts the viewer into a trance
The Gods were so very immersed by it;
That they were banished to an unfortunate death"

OH AND BTW
THERE ARE SCRUBS EPISODES ENTITLED:
'My Story'
'His Story'
'Her Story'
'Their Story'

It is fine as it was written.

Yeah it was fine, but I improved it.

I doo no g3t e@t

Lol jk, veryy..deep lol.

Did you win?